https://drive.google.com/file/d/1QP7iVliwgLafrhrdmkpx-YCD-9aYk7d7/view?
https://drive.google.com/file/d/17wxlwMrLZlw47jW-vH0vXHlfLeJ-ZKu4/view?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1R-8gF2qol4RWci2gzpifaQ53BW6i4thl/view?usp=sharing
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1cj6_ymp-4Ov_DuO3iRDizfXwSG0ABE5g/view?usp=sharing
For my big data essay, I chose to self-edit using the method of highlight the “They Say” in blue and “I Say” in green. This method helped me identify my evidence that supports my claim and my analysis. Doing this method, I noticed in some paragraphs I needed to add more evidence. I also realized some of my sources could have more analysis. I made these changes for my final draft.
